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You Scream, I Scream, We All Scream For Yogurt...

If you asked kids today what is the style of clothing being worn, they would reply skinny jeans and tee shirts. If you would ask kids 20-30 years ago, they would say the same thing. Believe it or not, our parents could have had some of our fashions in their closet when they were kids. What is the music of today? Techno, we would reply. Well, its true our parents listened to music like that when they were our age too. Today there are tons of old styles and foods becoming popular again. The biggest one of all, frozen yogurt ( froyo ) parlors. Ice cream is a thing of the past.
 
I recently visited Yogurtland. The line was out the door and people waited eagerly to get there fro yo on. On the wall, there were several yogurt machines of different flavors from Devils food cupcake batter to strawberry yogurt. You control how much you want of each flavor. My favorite flavors were the chocolate milk shake and the strawberry yogurt. Next, after getting your yogurt flavors then you go to the topping bar, which contained your all time favorite toppings. Fresh fruit to cereal to chocolate to nutter butters. Everything you can think of was there. After finishing the toppings then you go to the cashier where they weigh the container of your yogurt. This is only $.30 an ounce. My group of 4 friends got each a cup full of yogurt and toppings and it came to less then $14.
 
This is a family fun and friend hang out place perfect for any occasion and saves you money. My friend Lam Huynh said," Frozen yogurt is a healthy but delicious snack that everyone should try and there is no better place to try it then Yogurtland." You might be thinking what is frozen yogurt? Well, frozen yogurt is made with yogurt instead of cream so it is healthier then ice cream. It has beneficial probiotic bacteria that helps your whole body out. In yogurt, there are many nutrients found such as protein, calcium, and vitamin D. To wrap it up, frozen yogurt serves healthier then ice cream in calories, fat, and sugar. Be sure to check out www.yogurt-land.com/ for more details about new flavors of frozen yogurt. Prices may vary per store

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Comments

I think that skinny jeans and tees aren't really the most important part of the story, try and stay on topic, other than that fantastic story.

Dannika: Great story! (I would never have thought of a story on Yogurtland but that's a SUPER idea!) I do agree with Marie about some organization, but I think your content is fantastic and great for potential customers. Great pictures but check your spelling of Yogurtland in the first caption...:-) Nice job and great story idea.

Cool! Very interesting.

I liked the main guts, but your lead didn't really support it. Skinny jeans and all don't relate to yogurt. Great story anyway

I love your story. Although, frozen yogurt is what the story is about, not skinny jeans and music. The idea is a great one, but starting off topic is a not so great idea. Also, I agree with the comments of Marie... organization is key to a good article. I also think that the picture of you is a less important part of the article. The story is about Yogurtland, NOT YOU. Otherwise, the story was great, and a GREAT idea.

Nice job! I have been to Yogurtland multiple times, and agree with everything you included in your article. I would highly suggest, though, organizing your information so that, for example, the benefits of yogurt are not mentioned near the end of the paper, and instead near the introduction. Speaking of which, you may want to slightly adjust your opening paragraph-- the fact that the first sentence revolves around fashion may mislead readers to thinking that the article surrounds the topic of skinny jeans and T-Shirts. I love what you wanted to show in this paragraph-- that history may be repeating itself-- but maybe make that message more evident. Otherwise, I adored everything else!!!!!! Fantastic.

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